These sketches look awesome. I love the expressions on the animals and people. Each figure tells a different story by the expressions and the dynamic poses. The only thing that I can see you need to work on is some of the lines can get a little sketchy at times, but over all well done.
These are nice! The inclusion of props and environments in the lower sketches adds a lot to the story-telling element. The animal gestures have a lot of character and form. I think there are a few proportion issues in the lower sketches,the person in the chair looks way too big for the chair. But overall well done!
The animal drawings are really exciting; great caricature of shapes and form; the cat and hippo look fantastic. And it looks like you had fun with the storytelling prompt, they are hilarious! The life drawings on the bottoms are nice as well, I especially like what's going on with the child figure on the second page in the upper right corner. Great body language. I'd love to see some drawn interactions between characters. maybe even incorporate the storytelling prompt and humor with your life drawings, it looks like you enjoy making a story.
You've got a good handle on shaping, but I would love to see you push the dynamics a bit farther. As you sketch, question which shapes might a bit more angular, have a bit more verve, or are more rounded, etc… Another thing to consider is how the lines can undulate from thick to thin and articulate the depth of form. Good stuff in general!
These sketches look awesome. I love the expressions on the animals and people. Each figure tells a different story by the expressions and the dynamic poses. The only thing that I can see you need to work on is some of the lines can get a little sketchy at times, but over all well done.
ReplyDeleteThese are nice! The inclusion of props and environments in the lower sketches adds a lot to the story-telling element. The animal gestures have a lot of character and form. I think there are a few proportion issues in the lower sketches,the person in the chair looks way too big for the chair. But overall well done!
ReplyDeleteThe animal drawings are really exciting; great caricature of shapes and form; the cat and hippo look fantastic. And it looks like you had fun with the storytelling prompt, they are hilarious!
ReplyDeleteThe life drawings on the bottoms are nice as well, I especially like what's going on with the child figure on the second page in the upper right corner. Great body language.
I'd love to see some drawn interactions between characters. maybe even incorporate the storytelling prompt and humor with your life drawings, it looks like you enjoy making a story.
You've got a good handle on shaping, but I would love to see you push the dynamics a bit farther. As you sketch, question which shapes might a bit more angular, have a bit more verve, or are more rounded, etc… Another thing to consider is how the lines can undulate from thick to thin and articulate the depth of form. Good stuff in general!
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